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You are my creation

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This is by far one of my personal favourites from your gallery. The drawing's consistent, the color's very pleasing, a nice composition and so is the concept. Her hand, however, bothers me, both in anatomy and size. Even if you wanted to create that idea of tridimentionality by drawing her hand bigger, it just not works here. It would have look much more pleasing if it was probably a bit smaller, and if her thumb was either a little more to the left, or next to her other fingers [sorry if you didn't understand this, I kinda suck at explainning >v>'] I also notice that you were a little lazy with the lineart sometimes going a bit "overboard". xD Also, of what I understand she [you] is shaking the doll right? Maybe if you added a bit of movement like the doll's hair leaning more to one side or something like that, it would help create a better idea of movement, and it would make the drawing richer.
Nonetheless, you did a very nice job~ (: